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even god needs an editor. by ~RainyDaySmile:iconRainyDaySmile:



these subtle strings that some
  lonely god wove into souls and
       hearts, bones and blood--this is
          his swerving handwriting, curling
                across pages of skin and color.

i can see him now, bent over a long desk
   sweat collecting in beads along his brow,
     glittering in the ethereal candlelight, and he is
       writing in DNA, telling new stories:

genetic dramas written in lively ink,
  spilling across the dirt stage:
    some of us are tragedies,
        some of us are comedies,
          and some of us are masterpieces;
            (of course, we can't all be classic literature--
                every now and then the ending is abrupt, or
                    the plot twists itself into a knot and then so
                        does the rest of you)

but sometimes i think his greatest story is that
  quiet hollow that grows in your heart until it has
    consumed your every thought:
      sometimes i think he's telling us exactly how he
        feels.
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and so do i.

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:iconvkosaurus:
This is beautiful.
This is exactly how I feel sometimes. I think god is just an author.

My favorite line was: "and some of us are masterpieces;"

Good job.
:iconrainydaysmile:
thank you!

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:iconsodawitch:
i really like the title! =P and the entire poem of course!! AWESOMENESS! :fish:

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:iconlostwithindreams:
This is gorgeous. I love the images. (:

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:iconpecatrix:
I'd not thought of god as an author before. Now I do.

This poem is rather lovely, as are the images.
:iconrainydaysmile:
I appreciate that. :D

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They search for the method in our madness while we dare them to find the madness in our method.
:iconrainydaysmile:
Thank you very much!

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They search for the method in our madness while we dare them to find the madness in our method.
:iconlostwithindreams:
you're welcome! [=

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:iconiloveallstrangers:
This was incredible.
Kinda speechless.

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